Comments on: Three-Piece http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/ :life is literature Thu, 05 Jan 2012 07:36:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc By: Eric http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23910 Eric Mon, 30 Jul 2007 18:32:30 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23910 You could come work for me if I were more organizized. You could come work for me if I were more organizized.

]]> By: Nathan Reece http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23556 Nathan Reece Fri, 27 Jul 2007 10:58:33 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23556 I really like this story. I think it's a great commentary on how shaky the status of finding work is for young people. It's edgy too, with some definite satirical elements : I love the first line about masturbation and the eventual appearance in drag at work. That's good stuff. The dismissal by the non profit Christian group and the subsequent call on alcohol and Vicodin were probably the satirical high points to me. I thought this was funny, entertaining and well-written : the way each job builds to a memorable end is good, and the last paragraph about American work statistics seals the idea. Success! I really like this story. I think it’s a great commentary on how shaky the status of finding work is for young people. It’s edgy too, with some definite satirical elements : I love the first line about masturbation and the eventual appearance in drag at work. That’s good stuff. The dismissal by the non profit Christian group and the subsequent call on alcohol and Vicodin were probably the satirical high points to me. I thought this was funny, entertaining and well-written : the way each job builds to a memorable end is good, and the last paragraph about American work statistics seals the idea. Success!

]]> By: Elliott Reece http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23440 Elliott Reece Thu, 26 Jul 2007 15:55:24 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23440 Good piece. I look forward to reading more. And if you need more money, don't rule out stripping. Good piece. I look forward to reading more. And if you need more money, don’t rule out stripping.

]]> By: Jess http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23255 Jess Wed, 25 Jul 2007 13:55:23 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23255 i can't offer you a job...but my employer is always hiring....if you are in to financial stuff... ;) i liked what i read...and would like to read more... i can’t offer you a job…but my employer is always hiring….if you are in to financial stuff… ;) i liked what i read…and would like to read more…

]]> By: Greg Kraehenbuehl http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23250 Greg Kraehenbuehl Wed, 25 Jul 2007 13:34:10 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23250 Awesome write up there, and a great read. The comment about the most prosperous era definitely catches some attention, as well as what follows. Awesome write up there, and a great read. The comment about the most prosperous era definitely catches some attention, as well as what follows.

]]> By: Chris http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23245 Chris Wed, 25 Jul 2007 12:49:54 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23245 I have no job to offer or even the ability to provide another payed day off, but I do say very well done. I look forward to reading more. I have no job to offer or even the ability to provide another payed day off, but I do say very well done. I look forward to reading more.

]]> By: Ben (Chicago Ben) http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23157 Ben (Chicago Ben) Wed, 25 Jul 2007 02:29:32 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23157 Nice work man, I'm feeling very proud. Nice work man, I’m feeling very proud.

]]> By: brandon. http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23134 brandon. Tue, 24 Jul 2007 22:09:52 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23134 good job. more, damnit. good job. more, damnit.

]]> By: Christy http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23132 Christy Tue, 24 Jul 2007 22:04:38 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23132 Really cool piece. Love the last line! Really cool piece. Love the last line!

]]> By: Tommy http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23119 Tommy Tue, 24 Jul 2007 19:30:23 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/07/23/three-piece-suit-deceit/#comment-23119 I remember Halloweens. My dad made a Ghostbuster proton pack with real lights and switches. The next year was California Raisin, and I walked straight into a mailbox. Boy did he think that was funny. I haven't thought about that in years. Thanks for the memories. I remember Halloweens. My dad made a Ghostbuster proton pack with real lights and switches. The next year was California Raisin, and I walked straight into a mailbox. Boy did he think that was funny.

I haven’t thought about that in years. Thanks for the memories.

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