http://www.400words.com/2007/09/20/craft/ :life is literature Thu, 05 Jan 2012 07:36:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc http://www.400words.com/2007/09/20/craft/#comment-30231 roz warren Sun, 23 Sep 2007 11:29:05 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/09/20/craft/#comment-30231 Actually, I felt that "I was utterly broke." was an excellent first sentence. You've got nowhere to go from there but up! Actually, I felt that “I was utterly broke.” was an excellent first sentence. You’ve got nowhere to go from there but up!

]]> http://www.400words.com/2007/09/20/craft/#comment-30083 Meera Dhawan Fri, 21 Sep 2007 05:27:32 +0000 http://www.400words.com/2007/09/20/craft/#comment-30083 I read the Craft essay by Dave. His Essay Blog title is Craft. I like this essay that Dave wrote. It had vivid images of the stones that he made. The essay was clear and concise, and there were rarely any grammar mistakes that I noticed. I also liked that he described everywhere he went in Europe. It was interesting to learn about his life. I think that the only thing I did not like about his writing was that he went straight to the point, and there was no clear topic sentence in the first paragraph. I read the Craft essay by Dave. His Essay Blog title is Craft. I like this essay that Dave wrote. It had vivid images of the stones that he made. The essay was clear and concise, and there were rarely any grammar mistakes that I noticed. I also liked that he described everywhere he went in Europe. It was interesting to learn about his life. I think that the only thing I did not like about his writing was that he went straight to the point, and there was no clear topic sentence in the first paragraph.

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