Comments on: Easy

By: DEb

DEb — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 00:07:33 +0000

I enjoyed reading this piece for many reasons, humorous and even though very short it was poignant. I clearly saw the first person, and all the characters. It was well contained and it didn’t feel like the writer was chopping up a longer version of something. wonderful job. Although I’m not a writer I do appreciate effort and resources each writer puts into their work. Thank you for this-d

By: Shonna

Shonna — Thu, 07 Feb 2008 11:32:23 +0000

I’m taking a few writing classes and recently heard about this site. I really like your story. I’m a former server so I could relate. Very minimalistic and understated which seems to make a greater impact than pointing out things as odd or strange. Great read!

By: william shaw

william shaw — Thu, 31 Jan 2008 08:42:13 +0000

There’s a beautiful, flat, resigned tone to this one.

By: Mike Bayles

Mike Bayles — Wed, 23 Jan 2008 02:45:11 +0000

A diner is a great place to study the character of people of various walks of life. This essay is rich with character. Character is the stuff of great writing. Character is life.

By: Eric Henry

Eric Henry — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 00:05:17 +0000

The stranger eating heartily is from a town where all these same things are happening, just glad to be out of there for a minute. I know how it feels; I am a 12 year veteran of the restaurant industry.

By: Victor Mota

Victor Mota — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 02:39:54 +0000

Very well written, you can really get a sense of how complicated it is to own a restaurant. What a mess…