Comments on: Flux

By: Jess

Jess — Sat, 09 Feb 2008 01:02:39 +0000

Wow and double wow..

Maybe one day I’ll be 30, in grad school, and have a kid. And maybe I’ll think similar thoughts..

By: Mike Bayles

Mike Bayles — Wed, 16 Jan 2008 02:15:40 +0000

It’s a nice story about how there are important things, other than a career, this time a grad school. A friend of mine in Tennesse cherishes time with her daughter, when not at work. How touching. I once had a friend, and some of my best times were taking her children to the park, awya from the duties in my life. How nice to rediscover youth when with children!

Your story gave an interesting perspective on mlife.

By: Kelsey

Kelsey — Mon, 03 Dec 2007 23:55:18 +0000

I love this. I had to read it twice to really appreciate it, but all I have to say is thank you. This is so real–so beautiful.

By: Katherine

Katherine — Mon, 26 Nov 2007 17:09:30 +0000

Joey, what are you talking about?

By: Pearl Lumby

Pearl Lumby — Mon, 26 Nov 2007 06:17:00 +0000

The story suffered from diarrhea of the comma. That last sentence, “…drove the flux between my inadequacy in any single role, and my purpose” does not need a comma. I get that you want pause, but the comma just seems a stopgap measure.

By: Joey K

Joey K — Mon, 26 Nov 2007 06:10:37 +0000

Katherine why are you going to take this post down? You refuse to pull posts no matter how off topic, but my last three have been pulled?
Seriously you are deranged.
The stroy was good yadda yadda but this site is like licking dogs balls

By: firewings

firewings — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 18:54:15 +0000

This really struck me; I think it’s going to take some thinking to see if it’s in a good way or in a bad. Thanks for writing it.